Issue 3

[cubed05]

Pre-view Issue 3 here: lewasitenews.tripod.com/6538464.html
Post any suggestions/comments.

[Veret]

i like it! kurtwilson has some nice talent

i dont have time tonight to give any commentary thats actually insightful, but I can annoy you all with the little things:

-"ally" is misspelled a little ways into kurt's story
-"asset" is misspelled in the same paragraph
-"valuable" is misspelled in the beginning of the kurt-toad dialogue
-"able" is misspelled a little while afterwards
-"convenient" is misspelled near the end of kurt's story
-for the teaser, it says "answer for issue 1" when it should be "answer for issue 2"

[Hey Suburbia!]

Yeah, I rarely check my spelling.

Anyway, the next issue looks pretty good to me... except I might want to revise my article to include something about "Evil Shrooms", like the ones in my banner.

[Matermine]

Cubed, I sent you a couple of x-tra things you could add, such as a interview of me with...me! (homestarrunnerish)

[Veret]

cubed, I just looked over issue 3 again now that my thing has been added, and I saw that you forgot to remove something. at the end of the first conversation, theres a "note by veret", which you were supposed to read and then delete before publishing it. apparently, its still there

[Hey Suburbia!]

Nice article Veret. I liked it alot.


It seems I have some competition....

[Veret]

thanks. yours are great too!
im working on another article for the next time you need time off, but what with all my homework I doubt itll be dont in the next month