lyrics

[grape]

I was writing some lyrics to a song that I am making.

Flying so High
but moving so slow
in this plane I made
looking down,
at those on the ground

I won't go down for a while
because it's so pretty
I don't know when i'll land
i don't know if you could come
sad thing you'd rather stay
in this plane I just made

Any suggestions on adding anything
It's a slow acoustic song.

[Classicblast]

I just read it a few times and hummed it that last couple it's pretty cool.

[Hedgy]

Looks good! All it needs is the guitar and whatever other instruments are going in, and it should be great!

[aido179]

hmm, its good, but I would suggest better rhyme

[grape]

true but I'm almost done with it.

I'm writing another one, "Just a Dream" hopefully, that song name hasn't been taken yet.

Either way, I love playing music.