So I wrote a song. (With words!)

[_glitch_]

Yeah. So I wrote a song with words. I'll record it and host it later if I get any public interest but here's the lyrics. Tell me what you think.

Blown Away by Reality
by John Pavlick

Seems that I'm blown away by reality, and I don't know why-
I can't seem to get control of my life, no matter how hard I try-
Life has a reason to be lived, or so it seems to me -
But I'm still blown away by reality.-
(8 measure break)
I thought I was looking for you-
I had no reason to find you-
But it seems we were attracted-
Without any rhyme or reason-
I can't help the way I'm feeling-
You left my emotions reeling-
Looking for a refuge in this-
World of hate, distrust, and treason-
Now that I know you're not the one-
To calm my fears and dry my tears-
There's an empty spot you left to fill-
With what?-
Now reality has set in-
And I'm lonely once again but-
Now the pain is easier to-
Handle now that you're not here.-
(8 measure break)
I've been rethinking my existence for the last few days-
There is really only one option left, at least one that pays-
Getting control of my life I'm sure would work the best-
But until I can do that, it's me alone, against the rest-
I'm doing my best to end the pain, and stop the tragedy-
And make sure that this won't ever happen again.-
(8 measure break)
Now that this whole thing has ended-
Pain I've once again befriended-
Can I ever trust you not to-
Let your emotions go unchecked-
It seems you came then you were gone-
All the while I was so wrong to-
Open up my heart for you so-
I could let it get all wrecked-
I'm sorry for all the pain I've caused but-
Still it remains that I was wrong but-
Somehow this whole thing I-
Can't reconcile-
But I know I'll have to somehow-
Because I am all alone now-
Left to deal with guilt and shame-
That somehow might soften my pain.-
Seems that I'm blown away by reality, and it happened so fast-
I should have never expected your love to last.-
Seems that I'm blown away by reality, and I don't know why-
Tears freely flow down my face as I sit here, sob and cry-
Meaningfulness will return to life and then I'll see-
That I've had a taste of what's reality.-
[/End of song\]

_glitch_

[slippy0]

damn good, I say!
acoustic, I assume? looking forward to it!

[Classicblast]

I like it. Very good thought and rather deep. I like it.

[_glitch_]

Wow! Thanks for all the compliments.

I was thinking about the song. As of about 5 minutes ago I almost was rapping the lyrics because the song was about 150 BPM but I slowed it down to around 120 and now it sounds like electropop.

slippy0 said:

damn good, I say!
acoustic, I assume? looking forward to it!

Not acoustic, but now that I think of it, some killer guitar lixx might balance teh song out more. I'll try to add some in soon.

Once I get ahold of a mic and a few hours home alone I'll record it and upload it.

_glitch_

EDIT: I added in an electric guitar and it sounds awesome.

[Phil]

Real good Glitch.

[Kimm]

Whhoo hoo go _Glitch_ Youre awesome! ;D

[_glitch_]

Thanks!

Here's the instrumentation. Let me know if anything needs to be changed.

_glitch_

[im_an_alien]

It needs a real guitar

If you send me a version with just the guitar and the music for it I can try to record some real guitar...

[Classicblast]

You should record it and see if it takes off. I think it could.

[Slayzie]

Very, very good indeed. Likeys muey muchos.