Post by Mist. on Mar 12, 2009 23:26:50 GMT -5
I wrote the chorus, and the first verse... one of my online friends wrote the 2nd verse, please let me know what you think. its my new way of releasing my emotions out about whats going on in my life. everyone in my town is to stuck up and talk to much trash so I cant tell anyone about my problems so I found a new way... and this is it, writing my own raps haha. well let me know what you think, even if you think its a hunk of junk, let me know!!!!! thanks!
[Loyd = Me]
[5yN74X = Friend]
--Legit---
|Chorus|[Loyd]
Everytime you go by tears come to my eyes,
Girl you know we need in eachothers lives,
I'm sorry for playin you, Just try to understand,
i was following my supply and demand,
no more games, im through with this crap,
me and you shawty we can be legit,
|Verse 1| [Loyd]
Look shawty I understand your pain,
but why you gotta be puttin us in vein,
its like a campaign, when you come around
now im a lost puppy waiting to be found,
back to the war, this aint just talk like before,
baby girl im the treaty just sign the form,
if we work together we can be forever,
text my phone when your under the weather,
the choice is yours, just dont let my heart sever,
when it rains, my heart bleeds for us to remain,
when I look at the clock, im ready to explain,
our time has come, and its way overdue,
take me im yours, ill always stay true to you,
lets just go back, knowing everything was whack,
lets rewind the track, its time for attack,
i wont slack, baby well never fall thru the cracks...
|Chorus|x2
Everytime you go by tears come to my eyes,
Girl you know we need in eachothers lives,
I'm sorry for playin you, Just try to understand,
i was following my supply and demand,
no more games, im through with this crap,
me and you shawty we can be legit,
|Verse 2| [5yN74X]
It was perfect when we were together
Without you im left, out in the weather
Whether or not you see it, we were real
I need you back, this is me makin an appeal
Without you I cant deal, you were ideal
More elegant then a designer stilleto heel
We were unreal, cant feel the same without you
Since we split up, can't decide what to do
I need a clue, I need your help gettin through
Everything, without your love im askew
Twisted, My minds been chopped n screwed
Baby, my lifes grey, I need your bright blue
You bring color to my life, RGB in view
Your light cuts through, the shadows of life
Someday, I thought you could become my wife
The pain cuts like a steak knife, serated edge
Im out of breath, chest been hit by a sledge
I wanna be with you, lets take the pledge...
|Chorus|x2
Everytime you go by tears come to my eyes,
Girl you know we need in eachothers lives,
I'm sorry for playin you, Just try to understand,
i was following my supply and demand,
no more games, im through with this crap,
me and you shawty we can be legit,
[Loyd = Me]
[5yN74X = Friend]
--Legit---
|Chorus|[Loyd]
Everytime you go by tears come to my eyes,
Girl you know we need in eachothers lives,
I'm sorry for playin you, Just try to understand,
i was following my supply and demand,
no more games, im through with this crap,
me and you shawty we can be legit,
|Verse 1| [Loyd]
Look shawty I understand your pain,
but why you gotta be puttin us in vein,
its like a campaign, when you come around
now im a lost puppy waiting to be found,
back to the war, this aint just talk like before,
baby girl im the treaty just sign the form,
if we work together we can be forever,
text my phone when your under the weather,
the choice is yours, just dont let my heart sever,
when it rains, my heart bleeds for us to remain,
when I look at the clock, im ready to explain,
our time has come, and its way overdue,
take me im yours, ill always stay true to you,
lets just go back, knowing everything was whack,
lets rewind the track, its time for attack,
i wont slack, baby well never fall thru the cracks...
|Chorus|x2
Everytime you go by tears come to my eyes,
Girl you know we need in eachothers lives,
I'm sorry for playin you, Just try to understand,
i was following my supply and demand,
no more games, im through with this crap,
me and you shawty we can be legit,
|Verse 2| [5yN74X]
It was perfect when we were together
Without you im left, out in the weather
Whether or not you see it, we were real
I need you back, this is me makin an appeal
Without you I cant deal, you were ideal
More elegant then a designer stilleto heel
We were unreal, cant feel the same without you
Since we split up, can't decide what to do
I need a clue, I need your help gettin through
Everything, without your love im askew
Twisted, My minds been chopped n screwed
Baby, my lifes grey, I need your bright blue
You bring color to my life, RGB in view
Your light cuts through, the shadows of life
Someday, I thought you could become my wife
The pain cuts like a steak knife, serated edge
Im out of breath, chest been hit by a sledge
I wanna be with you, lets take the pledge...
|Chorus|x2
Everytime you go by tears come to my eyes,
Girl you know we need in eachothers lives,
I'm sorry for playin you, Just try to understand,
i was following my supply and demand,
no more games, im through with this crap,
me and you shawty we can be legit,
