chords of a torn heart

[aido179]

first song/vid on youtube!
theres no video, because I dont have a camera atm so its a sound recording with some funky pic I took a while back.
i think the sound quality is actually quite good.
any comments/suggestions/critique?

thanks in advance!
www.youtube.com/watch?v=UYOElStUbj0

[Mist.]

your voice reminds me of those badass classic rock songs
great song dude, make it longer and try and get a band together, you got talent.

[farti1]

Excellent voice and song! Reminds me of the 80's hairbands ballads.
You and Vix need to get together and make some music happen.

[Classicblast]

I agree with Farti1. You have a very nice voice for that kind of music. Like 80s style almost.

[aido179]

lol. thanks guys. spent years singing in church and school choirs. believe it or not I was a suprano..not sure whether it was 1 or 2 but the higher one! then my voice broke so i'll continue singing.

thanks guys. its still a work in progress so ill se what I can do!

[aido179]

update:
uploaded a second song. this is called rain. I like this one.
*link when video has finished processing*

[Blastgirl]

Wonderful.

[aido179]

lol. video never finished and my pc crashed...so no rain today! lol

i have doubled the song atm. with a chorus and two more verses which will just double the length of the regular verses.

this is how it goes:

when you dont want to see;
your own reflection
feels like your walking
in the wrong direction

or, theres a brick wall
blocking your path
another obsticle
you just want to get past

chorus:
pulling on the chords
of a torn heart
when theres no finish
and no place to start

when the sun beats down
dries up the stain
that your life has become
you just wish it would rain

well is it summer,
or is it spring
when theres no joy
in the birds as they sing

chorus: ...

when a love song
doesn't have any love
who do you write to
wheres that dove

to show peace
when your heart is torn
to find that someone
whos worth dieing for

so what do ya think?

[Mist.]

Maybe end it with the chorus? or a small snippet from the chorus...?
IDK I only see music that I like, idk what people think is good...
but I like it, definitely a great song.

[Kimm]

Great song.

[grape]

A very nice song! ;D

I also love the way the pictures go with it.

[aido179]

cool. thanks guys!
try to guess what the picture actually is!

[Mahnarch]

I'd say it's a close up of.......something! lol.

Awesome tones, bro-ha.
I'm kinda tone deaf, myself.

[aido179]

lol. yeah I got your comment on the vid. thanks!

[Mist.]

May 31, 2008 16:10:08 GMT -5 aido179 said:

cool. thanks guys!
try to guess what the picture actually is!

glass half way full of water?

[aido179]

lol. I guess posting the answer somewhere else was kind of stupid

[aido179]

well heres the new long version video!

[Blastgirl]

That was beautiful Aido.